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Elvis you are our Own Rose

Postby juliepresleyfan » Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:03 am

im going to say my words in prose
I liken you Elvis to a Heaven sent Rose

You started so young like the rose in bud
And Bloomed as you grew, into a handsome stud

You lived youre life, Under gods sunshine
And touched all our lives, not just mine

like the rose youre sweet perfection, winning all our hearts with true affection.
but just like gods delicate flower, that needs the sun and rain to sustain
its glow on earth, to maintain.

you needed our love and boy did we give it
we hoped our love could calm your fears, youve lived with it for many years.

But just like that rose you had your time in the sun, living your life, sometimes was trial but mostly fun.

like the rose when it loses its shade, its life in the balance starts to fade.
one blaze of brilliance then its gone, but the memory of its beauty lingers on.
just the same Elvis with you, a brilliant star all shiny bright, twinkles and shines then slips peacefully into the night.
you glowed with brilliance, now youre gone, but like the words to a lovely old song, how great thou art, and still are.

but we wont worry youve not gone far, youre up in heaven like a glorious
star.
so we wont worry we shant fret, we will see you someday but not just yet

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Postby Rainbow Light » Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:09 am

Brilliant poem and you've chosen a beautiful picture to fit in with this as well, congratulations, Julie, and thank you for sharing this too with us on ELC!!
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thanks sue

Postby juliepresleyfan » Thu Jul 27, 2006 7:06 am

thanks sue, you think its ok, i sat and done it while i put pic on, hope its ok thanks for your cooments
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Postby Rainbow Light » Thu Jul 27, 2006 11:00 am

Absolutely fine, thank you! Now got that picture as my screensaver as so nice! :)
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Postby Elvis'SweetSweetSpirit » Thu Jul 27, 2006 12:57 pm

Thank you very much Julie for the beautiful and touching poem I loved it!!
Thanks again!

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Postby maia » Thu Jul 27, 2006 2:37 pm

Really moving....from you heart and into OURS!

The image is great, too. 8)

It reminds me of something I wrote about him not long after his death called "Roses in the Snow." I will have to see if I can locate it and post it. YOU HAVE INSPIRED ME! :P
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Postby Amanda Viola » Thu Jul 27, 2006 4:28 pm

Loving Julie, it's great and beautiful, just like your soul.
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thanks all

Postby juliepresleyfan » Fri Jul 28, 2006 7:24 am

thanks all for your nice comments, thanks for saying i have a beautiful soul amanda im glad of that :D , thanks for the comments maia glad to have inspired you its nice to be part of something positive .
glad you liked the poem
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Postby Blue Moon » Fri Jul 28, 2006 2:13 pm

Julie, are you the author of the above poem? Wow, you have a real poetic gift. Like the theme of Elvis and roses together. Very fitting & touching.
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Postby Rainbow Light » Sat Jul 29, 2006 2:03 am

I agree, Julie, this relates to your beautiful soul as Amanda so rightly says! :)
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thanks everyone

Postby juliepresleyfan » Sat Jul 29, 2006 8:26 am

such nice things to say about my poem thanks, yes laurie i am the author of above poem
thanks julie
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Postby Rainbow Light » Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:32 am

Excellent, Julie! Please feel free to share as and whenever, ok? ....

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Postby Rainbow Light » Fri Aug 10, 2007 7:56 am

Bringing back around to anyone who has not seen yet! Such a beautiful poem by our Julie Sharon Rose! :D
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Postby MaryInTheMorning » Sat Aug 11, 2007 4:05 am

Very touching and beautiful sweet Julie. :D Thank you so much for sharing the beauty of your heart and this picture with us. :D My thanks to you also Sue for bringing this back around again. :D
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Postby Rainbow Light » Sun Aug 12, 2007 5:52 am

You're very welcome, is such a beautiful poem from our Julie Sharon Rose and says so much! :D
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