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Poems by Raina

Postby Raina » Sat Mar 17, 2007 9:58 am

If there are any poems from me that I'd like to share here with you, I will post them in this topic. That way I guess there is more room for poems by other people. :D

Here's one I wrote a few minutes ago.

Dear God


Dear God please guide my way
So I would not worry another day
I'm so weary feel so blue
My heart told me to turn to you

So here I am, at total loss
Wishing I could have that trust

Please God, help me remember
How to live my life in surrender
So thy love can fill my life
Without interference of a troubled mind

17-03-07
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Postby Amanda Viola » Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:00 am

Oh, Raina! Your poem is so touching... My heart responds to it, having been in that same place before, recognizing it. "ASK AND YOU'LL BE GIVEN". And your surrender to God, will bring in Love and Peace, for sure.

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Postby Barbara Lea » Sat Mar 17, 2007 10:28 pm

Raina you have put into words whats in my Heart! Thanks! Barbara Lea!
WITHOUT A SONG THE DAY WOULD NEVER END, WITHOUT A SONG A MAN AIN'T GOT A FREIND, WITHOUT A SONG. SO I KEEP ON SINGING A SONG.
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Postby Blue Moon » Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:20 pm

Raina, you have put into beautiful poetry what my soul has felt too. And I'm sure you have spoken for many.
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Postby Raina » Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:29 am

Thank you!!
Somethimes I feel like a prisoner of my own troubled mind.
Need to have a little more trust, to remember what it was like being a child.
You remember that? :wink:

Whoops, better hurry and get to work! Do't wanna be late and get in trouble haha
I spend so much time here, I forget the time!

Love, Raina
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Postby Sarena » Sun Mar 18, 2007 1:20 pm

Beautiful, Raina!! I think God is very touched by or childlike approach to Him!
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Postby Raina » Tue Mar 20, 2007 6:19 pm

Just a few words... :wink:



When God is for you
what can be against
All I ever needed
was laid inside my hands
I was given everything
though never realy saw
the truth that a treasure
resides inside my heart

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Postby Wanda June Hill » Tue Mar 20, 2007 7:59 pm

Truth in words brings peace in spirit. words from one of E.P.'s notes in a book that belonged to him.
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Postby MaryInTheMorning » Tue Mar 20, 2007 11:44 pm

Wanda June Hill wrote:Truth in words brings peace in spirit. words from one of E.P.'s notes in a book that belonged to him.


Amen Wanda! Truer words have never been so beautifully spoken! :D
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Postby Amanda Viola » Wed Mar 21, 2007 3:48 am

Raina wrote:Just a few words... :wink:



When God is for you
what can be against
All I ever needed
was laid inside my hands
I was given everything
though never realy saw
the truth that a treasure
resides inside my heart


Love, Raina


Here YOU are singing a real Song of Hope, Raina! Just precious. Image
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Postby Sarena » Wed Mar 21, 2007 7:54 am

Precious, indeed, Raina!!!! Thank you! :)
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Postby MaryInTheMorning » Wed Mar 21, 2007 12:11 pm

Geeze, Raina. I'm so sorry. :oops: Please forgive me for forgetting to mention in my last post how lovely your poem is and how much it related to and spoke directly to my heart and soul. :D Very touching and truly inspired! :D
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Postby Barbara Lea » Wed Mar 21, 2007 2:17 pm

WHAT GLORIOUS WORDS OF LOVE RAINA! THANK YOU! Barbara Lea! :D
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Postby Raina » Wed Mar 21, 2007 4:17 pm

Thank you!
It was just short though...
Don't worry Mary, no need to appologise at all!

"Truth in words brings peace in spirit"...That's beautyfully said!

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Postby Raina » Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:11 pm

I wrote these a few years back...

Borderline

Beautiful night
Silver moon
Twinkling stars
seen even at noon
With the moon behind me
while facing the sun
Im standing still
when everyone runs
Right between
two diffirent worlds
Where dusk meets dawn
where heaven meets earth
It's my perfect world
and it's so divine
I feel like im living
on the border line

May 03 2004


Guardian Angel

All alone with my deepest thoughts
Everything around me disappears
Lost in space
Lost in time..
I am alone where only you can hear
My silent prayers
My silent tears...

I never failed to believe you are there
For at times, when I need you the most
When I am hurt more then I can bear
I hear your voice
I feel you near...

In this life, you'll protect and lead me
And in time, In heaven you'll welcome me
I just have to believe in love, and share this
knowing Im able
Then I can always count on you
my Guardian Angel...

Nov. 6 2004
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