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Postby juliepresleyfan » Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:18 am

if you could tell me one thing Elvis
i wonder what it'd be
if your eyes could see just one thing more
tell me what now would you see

would it be lisa , her family and more
would it be cilla , who left you forlorn
or would it gracelands on a sunny bright morn

i am but a humble fan
one of millions in the throng
ive watched your films, and played your discs
and treasured every song

but i have a wish, a special dream
tho your living soul ive never seen
my wish is this ,so simple and true
that when i go to heavens door
youl be there when i come to explore

i may not get to graceland, a long held dream of mine
to stand with other fans
and join them all in line

so when god welcomes with a cheery greeting
may he please grant an extra meeting

please god allow me just one prayer
please let Elvis be standing there
not for long , a little while
oh let me see that gorgeous smile

those deep blue eyes, and loving soul
to see him just once is my goal
so while im here god and if im good
and i live my life like i know i should
oh grant me see where Elvis stood

so dear elvis , dont you fret
im coming up, but not just yet
so when im finished, my work is done
and the earth with me is through
when i come to meet my maker
please grant me a visit with you

thank you GOD for all you made,
and the wondefull souls my friends
thankyou for my family , and for all the things i know
for being you , and loving us
and never letting us go

And thanks for Elvis Presley
now that really was a show
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Postby Amanda Viola » Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:30 am

Precious moving poem-prayer, Julie!

I'm sure your heart's dream will come true. El'vis promised to welcome those that asked him to. 8) And you are certainly asking with all your heart. :)
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Postby Blue Moon » Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:34 am

A very lovely poem, Julie. :P I still believe you will make it to Graceland one day. Also, I think you will have more than just a visit with Elvis in the afterlife. You will have eternity to have many many visits. And I bet he has a room in his manion with your name on it. :D
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Postby Sarena » Wed Feb 28, 2007 5:17 am

Julie, your poem is very touching to me and I'm sure, more so to Elvis himself!
How could he resist to grant your prayer and deep desire? Impossible!!

This is something to look forward to when time has come to leave here...
also for me!!
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thanks christine and laurie

Postby juliepresleyfan » Sat Mar 03, 2007 3:35 am

hi all thanks for that christine and laurie, id love to meet Elvis when i get to heaven, im sure we all will, i heard he visits each fan when they go , dont know where but i heard it somewhere lol, wouldnt that be great, you think he would consider me myself worth a visit, that would be great wouldnt it lol.
i must admit i do sometimes wonder if he approves of the way i handle myself ever mindfull of what he would do in same situations lol

no im not an obsessed fan lol, i just like to pay him some mind about stuff is all, after all he is a man to look up too, so i just sometimes try to do the best and try to make him proud of me , and hope he is smiling anyway.
plus i want to show that Elvis presley has a good influence on me , and is a good man, we all know someone who has tried to tell us otherwise dont we probabley, but i listen to my heart and that never steers me wrong.
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Postby Amanda Viola » Sat Mar 03, 2007 6:41 am

Dear Julie,

Your last post has brought a suspicious humidity to my eyes. Thank you for BEING YOU! Image
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Postby Amanda Viola » Sat Mar 03, 2007 6:42 am

Now and then we have the privilege to be in front of a pure soul. Elvis was one of them too.

Here are two angels. I'm not going to write their names, just guess:

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